5 Comments

that line “lay my meat in the sun to cook” is incredible. I had to read it over and over. really spectacular

Expand full comment

Really loved this one✨️ and it gave me an inspiration for my next poem.

Expand full comment

I'd be waiting to read your poem.

Expand full comment

“helper on the day i die…” really liked this one Rick!

Expand full comment

:)

Expand full comment