This is so poignant and relatable. upon reading this, so much comes rushing back and I feel overwhelmed by this poem's kinesthetic accuracy. this is beautiful.
‘if you touch I’d cry’ —this line is amazing. gosh, so few words but so evocative. I can empathize with the feeling, either from pain or loneliness being brought to tears by a simple touch. Just wonderful work, Rick.
This is beautiful Rick. Touching too
Thanks a lot :)
This is so poignant and relatable. upon reading this, so much comes rushing back and I feel overwhelmed by this poem's kinesthetic accuracy. this is beautiful.
Thank you so much.
‘if you touch I’d cry’ —this line is amazing. gosh, so few words but so evocative. I can empathize with the feeling, either from pain or loneliness being brought to tears by a simple touch. Just wonderful work, Rick.
I wrote this line at school when I was feeling overwhelmed and wanted to cry - barely keeping myself together.
I can feel that, and for those who couldn’t, your words should let them
Very thought provoking 🦕